I find it a bit ironic to see the last paragraph singled out for praise when it is was something I just tossed off. It was the paragraph before that that I laboured over for at least a quarter of an hour and still wasn't satisfied that it clearly presented the point I wanted to make.
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Date: 2012-11-02 02:25 pm (UTC)