şüpheli görüyor looks more like "it looks doubtful" than "it seems" and beni is a direct object where I would expect a dative one. "It seems to me" I would translate as bana görünüyor or bana gözüküyor. If you use that, I don't see that you need bence as well.
I'm not sure saksı is the word you want for "pot"; it means "flower pot", not "cooking pot", which would be kap. I'm also not sure what bir is doing in front of kazan rather than dağgelinciği.
For "eyeing suspiciously", I would probably go with şüpheyle bakmak "look at with doubt", i.e. beni şüpheyle bakan bir dağgelinciği "a ferret looking at me with suspicion".
geliyorki > geliyorki (don't confuse the ki which is suffixed with the independent particle; they have different meanings and are pronounced differently)
kapida > kapta (the first means "at the gate", not "in the pot")
taa (very) (is this slang? I don't know it--and don't see why it's necessary)
bana/beni (bakmak takes the dative, e.g. bak bana! "Look at me!")
Once you're happy with it, you might want to post it to learn_turkish and watch the real speakers contradict everything I've gone and told you.
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it seemed to me that there was a weasel in the pot, or at least a ferret eying me suspiciously from the interior depths of a cauldron.
So far I have:
Bence, bir gelincik saksında, hiç olmazsa dağgelinciği bir kazanin içerdeki derinliğinden beni şüpheli görüyor/bakıyor.
(help would be appreciated)
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I'm not sure saksı is the word you want for "pot"; it means "flower pot", not "cooking pot", which would be kap. I'm also not sure what bir is doing in front of kazan rather than dağgelinciği.
For "eyeing suspiciously", I would probably go with şüpheyle bakmak "look at with doubt", i.e. beni şüpheyle bakan bir dağgelinciği "a ferret looking at me with suspicion".
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Bana öyle geliyorki, kapida bir gelincik vardi, veya en azindan kazanin taa (very) derinliklerinden bana/beni şüpheyle bakan bir dağgelinciği vardi.
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kapida > kapta (the first means "at the gate", not "in the pot")
taa (very) (is this slang? I don't know it--and don't see why it's necessary)
bana/beni (bakmak takes the dative, e.g. bak bana! "Look at me!")
Once you're happy with it, you might want to post it to